One of the most common issues with novel-writing is starting in the right spot! If you don’t snag a reader’s attention right away, they could set your book down and never pick it up again. The same is true for agents. Your query could promise the most exciting novel in the history of the world, but if you start your book in the wrong place, an agent won’t see it. Most request between 5 to 10 pages, so if your novel really gets going on page 11, you might be on the receiving end of a form rejection.

The Exciting Incident Service includes:
*Paragraph with detailed feedback regarding clarity, pacing, and whether your protagonist is compelling. We will evaluate tone, style, voice, and most importantly: active steps for fixing issues to ensure the strongest impression possible.
*Live discussion via Zoom or text chat about your WIP to ensure you’ve introduced your characters in an exciting but clear manner.
*Detailed line editing for the first 20 pages or 5,000 words (whichever is more)